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Write a Haiku about the person above you
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RE: Write a Haiku about the person above you
I despise haiku,
It is poor man's 'poetry',
Rhyme it's most deaf to.

Haiku's nature's kind,
Builds itself forgivingly,
Its wordsmiths most blind.

And of poems' rhythm:
Discarded into the sea...
Worth little to them.

Why must this be so?
I believe haiku's lazy,
Comforting, and slow.

Creativity...
Makes writing haiku weary,
Dull activity.

Soulless imagery,
Oft' writ without energy,
This is drudgery.

Yeah, I'm totally bored.

...

Like seriously: put some fucking work into rhythm, rhyme, and meaning... or do not call it a poem.
Please give me a home where cloud buffalo roam
Where the dear and the strangers can play
Where sometimes is heard a discouraging word
But the skies are not stormy all day
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Messages In This Thread
Write a Haiku about the person above you - by NoMoreFaith - April 4, 2012 at 11:33 am
RE: Write a Haiku about the person above you - by Erinome - April 4, 2012 at 11:35 am
RE: Write a Haiku about the person above you - by Erinome - April 4, 2012 at 12:07 pm
RE: Write a Haiku about the person above you - by Erinome - April 4, 2012 at 12:36 pm
RE: Write a Haiku about the person above you - by Aegrus - April 5, 2012 at 12:32 am
RE: Write a Haiku about the person above you - by Violet - April 8, 2012 at 10:21 pm
RE: Write a Haiku about the person above you - by Rayaan - April 8, 2012 at 10:46 pm

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