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{Poem} Nevermore

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{Poem} Nevermore
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RE: {Poem} Nevermore
November 20, 2009 at 1:22 pm
(November 20, 2009 at 12:42 pm)Meatball Wrote:
Quote:There was a young man named Todd
Who didn't believe in a god
He posted online
that he feels just fine,
but christians consider him odd.
How about now?
Bolding mine

Awesome! but it needed a syllable to maintain the 5 beats in the middle so I fixed it for you. The first line has a pause to maintain the 8 beats of the A part of the rhyme so I didn't feel the need to add a word.

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{Poem} Nevermore

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{Poem} Nevermore - by Tails Turrosaki - November 14, 2009 at 5:51 pm
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by littlegrimlin1 - November 14, 2009 at 7:03 pm
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by theblindferrengi - November 16, 2009 at 12:40 am
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by Samson - November 16, 2009 at 1:39 am
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by Amphora - November 20, 2009 at 4:47 pm
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by Tails Turrosaki - November 17, 2009 at 10:17 pm
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by littlegrimlin1 - November 20, 2009 at 12:13 am
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by Meatball - November 20, 2009 at 10:24 am
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by Rhizomorph13 - November 20, 2009 at 12:04 pm
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by Meatball - November 20, 2009 at 12:42 pm
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by Rhizomorph13 - November 20, 2009 at 1:22 pm
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by Meatball - November 20, 2009 at 1:29 pm
RE: {Poem} Nevermore - by Rhizomorph13 - November 20, 2009 at 2:20 pm

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