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pool wrote another poem :) Criticism welcome :)
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pool wrote another poem :) Criticism welcome :)
Pitch Black

As the light abandons,
as the dark engulf us,
deep into the night,
we're often lost in the dark.

Come what will,
stand your ground,
for all your troubles
turn inane in a while.

Entrust your sanity,
not to your ego
but to your heart,
that rid you of sorrow.

Look for your light,
fear not the dark,
rise from your ashes,
dawn isn't afar.
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