(February 21, 2014 at 9:50 am)Napoléon Wrote: Is it normal in America to write essays in first person?
Depends really, in my college english courses they asked us not to. I pretty much never refer to myself, or I, unless the subject is about me.
On the actually essay it self, it was fine Yahweh, which I'm guessing your in high school? If I'm correct, then it's fine.