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Some poetry
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RE: Some poetry
In my mid twenties I had a go at writing some poetry. Here is one rhymer and one not.

Something about autonomy and relationship.

Wholest each together be.
Between the two a rainbow see.
All is seen through either eye
but depth requires two should try.


Sorry. I would tell you what this one was about but I'm no longer high.

Not doing.
Not withholding doing.
Nothing above.
No thing below.
See.
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Some poetry - by Baqal - July 6, 2014 at 5:34 am
RE: Some poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - July 6, 2014 at 5:16 pm
RE: Some poetry - by Baqal - July 7, 2014 at 9:30 am
RE: Some poetry - by Baqal - July 9, 2014 at 12:53 pm
RE: Some poetry - by Rhizomorph13 - July 9, 2014 at 10:00 pm
RE: Some poetry - by Baqal - July 10, 2014 at 2:20 am
RE: Some poetry - by ManMachine - July 10, 2014 at 4:21 am
RE: Some poetry - by Losty - July 10, 2014 at 2:30 am
RE: Some poetry - by Baqal - July 10, 2014 at 9:12 am
RE: Some poetry - by Mudhammam - July 10, 2014 at 2:51 am
RE: Some poetry - by Little lunch - July 10, 2014 at 7:35 am
RE: Some poetry - by Little lunch - July 10, 2014 at 10:25 am
RE: Some poetry - by Losty - July 12, 2014 at 5:50 am
RE: Some poetry - by Baqal - July 12, 2014 at 5:55 am
RE: Some poetry - by Losty - July 12, 2014 at 6:00 am
RE: Some poetry - by Brian37 - July 12, 2014 at 6:33 am
RE: Some poetry - by Losty - July 12, 2014 at 8:01 am
RE: Some poetry - by Little lunch - July 12, 2014 at 7:44 am
RE: Some poetry - by Whateverist - July 12, 2014 at 7:57 am
RE: Some poetry - by Mudhammam - July 12, 2014 at 2:11 pm
RE: Some poetry - by Brian37 - July 13, 2014 at 1:14 pm
RE: Some poetry - by Little lunch - July 13, 2014 at 5:42 pm
RE: Some poetry - by Brian37 - July 13, 2014 at 6:08 pm
RE: Some poetry - by Little lunch - July 17, 2014 at 7:14 am

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