(July 12, 2014 at 6:33 am)Brian37 Wrote: While poetry shouldn't be "see spot run", it also does not have to be so coded the message gets missed.
It's not really meant to be coded. It was originally meant to be an intro for a book I was thinking of writing. You have a book about child abuse with that intro and the point is obvious. I've changed it a lot since I first wrote it, but it's meaning is still hard to decipher. I'm okay with that for now. It's mine and I like it, but if I decide to make it more public I will have to change it or accept that it will always be assumed to be about romantic love.