RE: Therapy is like, the best! ^_^
October 24, 2014 at 3:46 am
(This post was last modified: October 24, 2014 at 3:49 am by Lemonvariable72.)
(October 24, 2014 at 3:25 am)Alice Wrote:(October 24, 2014 at 3:07 am)Lemonvariable72 Wrote: See, first person is much better.
Changing it up is the best.There's a lot at my disposal, it'd be a shame to not use most of it.
Yes, but the POV made that story much more enthralling then the last third person story. See third person works when there is a lot point of view characters, or if you want to be super descriptive with the world. Like asoiaf or harry Potter. For the story you had there a first person POV like the hunger games is best.
Bear in mind I'm partial to first person because it throws the reader right in the driver seat as opposed to the more distant third person.when you use third person I prefer a Isaac Asimov type style that is very clear and concise and does not use much description, that said George martin has a great style too.
To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow,
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,
To the last syllable of recorded time;
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,
To the last syllable of recorded time;
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.
