RE: A Poem I wrote
October 23, 2015 at 6:28 pm
(This post was last modified: October 23, 2015 at 6:28 pm by Edwardo Piet.)
I liked that poem, great for a first poem.
I only ever wrote one poem and then I gave up because it sucked and was cryptic bullshit. It's supposed to be some kind of metaphor about a lizard in the desert digging a hole in the sand, half way through it's life as time ticks on. It's more of an image than a metaphor. Fuck knows what it's supposed to represent and this image of it I describe is vastly larger than the bullshit poem I wrote. The poem is only six words. It just came to me on the night, it's bullshit I dunno I just felt like writing it down on twitter once.
Anyway here it is, the cryptic bullshit poem that I don't even understand myself that came to me years ago when I wasn't very well:
Sand lizard - half gone - clockwork sun.
Fuck knows what that is supposed to mean... I call B.S.
I only ever wrote one poem and then I gave up because it sucked and was cryptic bullshit. It's supposed to be some kind of metaphor about a lizard in the desert digging a hole in the sand, half way through it's life as time ticks on. It's more of an image than a metaphor. Fuck knows what it's supposed to represent and this image of it I describe is vastly larger than the bullshit poem I wrote. The poem is only six words. It just came to me on the night, it's bullshit I dunno I just felt like writing it down on twitter once.
Anyway here it is, the cryptic bullshit poem that I don't even understand myself that came to me years ago when I wasn't very well:
Sand lizard - half gone - clockwork sun.
Fuck knows what that is supposed to mean... I call B.S.
