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Haiku is a humanism
#11
RE: Haiku is a humanism
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#12
RE: Haiku is a humanism
(May 30, 2016 at 8:49 am)bennyboy Wrote: There was a lady,
Who came from Uttoxeter.
She was a good cock. . .

Goddamit. This form is too limiting for my artistic sensibilities.

Been to Limerick.
The best part about it was
going somewhere else
The fool hath said in his heart, There is a God. They are corrupt, they have done abominable works, there is none that doeth good.
Psalm 14, KJV revised edition

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#13
RE: Haiku is a humanism
(May 30, 2016 at 8:43 am)carusmm Wrote:
(May 30, 2016 at 8:26 am)Little lunch Wrote: I put five words here,
Then I put seven words in here,
What do I do now?

Haiku has officially a 5-7-5 syllable structure in English.

Haiku's magic.
Haiku's done five-seven-five
or otherwise.

Even Basho the old Japanese haiku master broke the rules of form when it was required.  

Senryu is a form of haiku with a more human touch than traditional haiku. Haiku is an acquired taste.  I acquired it as soon as I saw it for the first time.  It is a poetic expression with endless possibilities like humanism.  I love it as I love humanism.

Ummmm....is four the new five?
"For me, it is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." - Carl Sagan
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#14
RE: Haiku is a humanism
(May 30, 2016 at 3:48 pm)c172 Wrote:
(May 30, 2016 at 8:43 am)carusmm Wrote: Haiku has officially a 5-7-5 syllable structure in English.

Haiku's magic.
Haiku's done five-seven-five
or otherwise.

Even Basho the old Japanese haiku master broke the rules of form when it was required.  

Senryu is a form of haiku with a more human touch than traditional haiku. Haiku is an acquired taste.  I acquired it as soon as I saw it for the first time.  It is a poetic expression with endless possibilities like humanism.  I love it as I love humanism.

Ummmm....is four the new five?

four is the new five
and five is the new seven
math is very hard
The fool hath said in his heart, There is a God. They are corrupt, they have done abominable works, there is none that doeth good.
Psalm 14, KJV revised edition

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RE: Haiku is a humanism
I will give this thread 5/7
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#16
RE: Haiku is a humanism
There was a young man of Tralee
Who was stung on the neck by a wasp
When asked "Did it hurt?"
He replied "Not at all,
It can do it again if it likes."
At the age of five, Skagra decided emphatically that God did not exist.  This revelation tends to make most people in the universe who have it react in one of two ways - with relief or with despair.  Only Skagra responded to it by thinking, 'Wait a second.  That means there's a situation vacant.'
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#17
RE: Haiku is a humanism
(May 30, 2016 at 3:48 pm)c172 Wrote:
(May 30, 2016 at 8:43 am)carusmm Wrote: Haiku has officially a 5-7-5 syllable structure in English.

Haiku's magic.
Haiku's done five-seven-five
or otherwise.

Even Basho the old Japanese haiku master broke the rules of form when it was required.  

Senryu is a form of haiku with a more human touch than traditional haiku. Haiku is an acquired taste.  I acquired it as soon as I saw it for the first time.  It is a poetic expression with endless possibilities like humanism.  I love it as I love humanism.

Ummmm....is four the new five?

In nonsense, maths
adds up like nothing else.
A dream it is not.
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#18
RE: Haiku is a humanism
A poster with haiku doth start
And claims it's a humanist art
but rhyming's good too
from my point of view
All art then is humanist art
"The family that prays together...is brainwashing their children."- Albert Einstein
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#19
RE: Haiku is a humanism
(May 30, 2016 at 8:00 pm)drfuzzy Wrote: A poster with haiku doth start
And claims it's a humanist art
but rhyming's good too
from my point of view
All art then is humanist art

Actually, that is not far off the mark from what I think.

(May 30, 2016 at 7:46 pm)Stimbo Wrote: There was a young man of Tralee
Who was stung on the neck by a wasp
When asked "Did it hurt?"
He replied "Not at all,
It can do it again if it likes."

A Tricky Treat:
A Limerick

F is for fruit.
Fruit rhymes with brute.
Limericks are tricky.
Limericks are syrupy.
A good limerick's a beaut.
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#20
RE: Haiku is a humanism
I fool so feelish,
But I think I got it now.
Should this thing rhyme though?
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