(May 22, 2015 at 10:25 pm)Surgenator Wrote: My attempt.

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You definitely get an A for effort man.
Couple thoughts: 
Less themes.  Napoleon's right.  You've got a lot going on there. You want the viewer to be drawn to it, not rattled by it.
Try to keep your color use to no more than three.  Even one is just fine if it's used correctly.
As a rule of thumb, give your script a backing, a frame, or any kind of effect that separates the letters from the background.  

Seriously though - I think its great when someone puts something out there for others to judge.  It shows real courage when someone allows themselves to be scorned or ridiculed for a creative endeavor.  Thus my kudos.  

FYI, my first graphic was fucking terrible.  (some of them still are).

Coming up on the end, folks! 5 days until the competition comes to a close. Remember to PM your official entries to Tiberius. If you are on the fence, do one!

(May 26, 2015 at 3:36 pm)Cinjin Wrote:

(May 22, 2015 at 10:25 pm)Surgenator Wrote: My attempt.

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You definitely get an A for effort man.
Couple thoughts: 
Less themes.  Napoleon's right.  You've got a lot going on there. You want the viewer to be drawn to it, not rattled by it.
Try to keep your color use to no more than three.  Even one is just fine if it's used correctly.
As a rule of thumb, give your script a backing, a frame, or any kind of effect that separates the letters from the background.  

Seriously though - I think its great when someone puts something out there for others to judge.  I shows real courage when someone allows themselves to be scorned or ridiculed for a creative endeavor.  Thus my kudos.  

FYI, my first graphic was fucking terrible.  (some of them still are).

I can feel it, bro.

 

(May 26, 2015 at 3:36 pm)Cinjin Wrote:

(May 22, 2015 at 10:25 pm)Surgenator Wrote: My attempt.

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You definitely get an A for effort man.
Couple thoughts: 
Less themes.  Napoleon's right.  You've got a lot going on there. You want the viewer to be drawn to it, not rattled by it.
Try to keep your color use to no more than three.  Even one is just fine if it's used correctly.
As a rule of thumb, give your script a backing, a frame, or any kind of effect that separates the letters from the background.  

Seriously though - I think its great when someone puts something out there for others to judge.  It shows real courage when someone allows themselves to be scorned or ridiculed for a creative endeavor.  Thus my kudos.  

FYI, my first graphic was fucking terrible.  (some of them still are).

I typically go overboard on the number of colors. Unfortunately, I don't think I have the time to fix this.

Sadly, I lack the tools and the talent to do a professional logo.  But, what the hell.

(May 27, 2015 at 2:40 pm)Jörmungandr Wrote: Sadly, I lack the tools and the talent to do a professional logo.  But, what the hell.

This one's actually pretty nice, it might be cool to have a theme that's a bit brighter.

I really love the current theme though. Maybe there should be a selection of themes and either we can change the theme we use ourselves or the staff just updates it a bit more often to keep things fresh?

I think the new banner should have this kid in it. I think it represents all of us Atheists.

http://youtu.be/PUKMUZ4tlJg

Ok, I guess that's it. We'll be in touch with results in due course ^_^ Thank you to everyone who posted entries, I'm sure Tibs is having a really great time going through them (heehee).

(May 27, 2015 at 11:29 am)Surgenator Wrote:

(May 26, 2015 at 3:36 pm)Cinjin Wrote: You definitely get an A for effort man.
Couple thoughts: 
Less themes.  Napoleon's right.  You've got a lot going on there. You want the viewer to be drawn to it, not rattled by it.
Try to keep your color use to no more than three.  Even one is just fine if it's used correctly.
As a rule of thumb, give your script a backing, a frame, or any kind of effect that separates the letters from the background.  

Seriously though - I think its great when someone puts something out there for others to judge.  It shows real courage when someone allows themselves to be scorned or ridiculed for a creative endeavor.  Thus my kudos.  

FYI, my first graphic was fucking terrible.  (some of them still are).

I typically go overboard on the number of colors. Unfortunately, I don't think I have the time to fix this.

Awesome idea, though. It's hard not to want to include all of those elements. As well, the figure evolving toward the sun and away from all the religious imagery is spot on.