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RE: Winter
April 1, 2018 at 5:43 pm
(April 1, 2018 at 6:40 am)Losty Wrote: A cool morning breeze
To rustle her fading autumn leaves
It has been a long year
The spring woke her kindly
And though she's a tired worn old tree
He told her there was nothing to fear
Spring is always false hope
Promises of new life
Spring tells her that she's beautiful
He's insincere and full of lies
The torturous sun of a thousand hells
Summer beats her back down
He tells her faith is futile
Summer always burns her
He revels in her misery
Summer thinks she's worthless
A bent and broken nothing tree
Autumn starts with hurricanes
Painful wind and forceful rains
Autumn seeks to drown her
He knows her ugly secrets
Autumn speaks of past mistakes
He plays his song on her regrets
But winter makes her shine true
Sparkling in her crystal limbs
Winter is the cold truth
He's not here to cause harm
He'll give her what she's longed for
A sweet death inside his arms
Winter won’t deny her
Gone today, but not forever
~Losty
That is fucking beautiful!
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RE: Winter
April 1, 2018 at 5:46 pm
Thank you chimp
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RE: Winter
April 1, 2018 at 5:57 pm
(This post was last modified: April 1, 2018 at 5:58 pm by Mystic.)
What will winter do to me, but call me a fool
While spring confirms my struggles,
And summer rewards them.
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RE: Winter
April 1, 2018 at 8:44 pm
(This post was last modified: April 1, 2018 at 8:51 pm by chimp3.)
The embrace of Winter
We shiver in it's grasp
Frozen geese flee
Winter's bonds
Only to return home
Upon Spring's release
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RE: Winter
April 1, 2018 at 11:09 pm
I felt it, Losty. Thank you for sharing.
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RE: Winter
April 2, 2018 at 1:11 pm
(April 1, 2018 at 6:42 am)Losty Wrote: Go ahead and judge me harshly. I know it’s rough but it’s something. I really really want to start writing again but every time I try I just sit there with a pencil and a notebook and nothing comes to me. It makes me want to cry. Writing has always been my outlet even though I’m not particularly good at it, it makes me feel better. And now i just feel empty. I’ve got nothing to write about and it sucks.
That was beautiful.
Don't change a thing Losty.
I write too, and believe me, after 30 years of writing, you will have those dry spells. It isn't something you can force. You'll have something to say again. Just give it time.
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RE: Winter
April 2, 2018 at 2:58 pm
(April 1, 2018 at 6:42 am)Losty Wrote: Go ahead and judge me harshly. I know it’s rough but it’s something. I really really want to start writing again but every time I try I just sit there with a pencil and a notebook and nothing comes to me. It makes me want to cry. Writing has always been my outlet even though I’m not particularly good at it, it makes me feel better. And now i just feel empty. I’ve got nothing to write about and it sucks.
I thought it was pretty damn enjoyable.
And I know all about writer's block. (One of my online nicknames is even Belgianwritersblock.)
It's easier said than done, but you gotta power through it and accept that even when you don't have anything good to write, you gotta write something bad.
You an always throw away bad stuff, but it can help you get back in the zone.
Don't give up losty, power though. You won't be lost forever.
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RE: Winter
April 2, 2018 at 3:16 pm
I got a bag a slake and a shovel in the trunk, Losty, you know...if you have anyone in mind.
(good stuff, spring is false hope, aint it..fuckin spring)
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RE: Winter
April 2, 2018 at 3:18 pm
(April 2, 2018 at 2:58 pm)Mr.Obvious Wrote: (April 1, 2018 at 6:42 am)Losty Wrote: Go ahead and judge me harshly. I know it’s rough but it’s something. I really really want to start writing again but every time I try I just sit there with a pencil and a notebook and nothing comes to me. It makes me want to cry. Writing has always been my outlet even though I’m not particularly good at it, it makes me feel better. And now i just feel empty. I’ve got nothing to write about and it sucks.
I thought it was pretty damn enjoyable.
And I know all about writer's block. (One of my online nicknames is even Belgianwritersblock.)
It's easier said than done, but you gotta power through it and accept that even when you don't have anything good to write, you gotta write something bad.
You an always throw away bad stuff, but it can help you get back in the zone.
Don't give up losty, power though. You won't be lost forever.
Even if your username is losty. ( Snickers)
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RE: Winter
April 2, 2018 at 3:25 pm
I'll always love your writing Losty
I'm sure the inspiration will come back again someday, even if it takes a while. I think it will come back for the same reasons that it arrived in the first place.
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