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Winter
#11
RE: Winter
(April 1, 2018 at 6:40 am)Losty Wrote: A cool morning breeze
To rustle her fading autumn leaves
It has been a long year

The spring woke her kindly
And though she's a tired worn old tree
He told her there was nothing to fear

Spring is always false hope
Promises of new life
Spring tells her that she's beautiful
He's insincere and full of lies

The torturous sun of a thousand hells

Summer beats her back down
He tells her faith is futile

Summer always burns her
He revels in her misery
Summer thinks she's worthless
A bent and broken nothing tree

Autumn starts with hurricanes
Painful wind and forceful rains

Autumn seeks to drown her
He knows her ugly secrets
Autumn speaks of past mistakes
He plays his song on her regrets

But winter makes her shine true
Sparkling in her crystal limbs

Winter is the cold truth
He's not here to cause harm
He'll give her what she's longed for
A sweet death inside his arms

Winter won’t deny her
Gone today, but not forever

~Losty

That is fucking beautiful!
God thinks it's fun to confuse primates. Larsen's God!






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#12
RE: Winter
Thank you chimp Smile
(August 21, 2017 at 11:31 pm)KevinM1 Wrote: "I'm not a troll"
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Hammy Wrote:and we also have a sheep on our bed underneath as well
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#13
RE: Winter
What will winter do to me, but call me a fool Tongue

While spring confirms my struggles,
And summer rewards them.
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#14
RE: Winter
The embrace of Winter
We shiver in it's grasp
Frozen geese flee 
Winter's bonds
Only to return home
Upon Spring's release
God thinks it's fun to confuse primates. Larsen's God!






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#15
RE: Winter
I felt it, Losty. Thank you for sharing. Heart
"Hipster is what happens when young hot people do what old ladies do." -Exian
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#16
RE: Winter
(April 1, 2018 at 6:42 am)Losty Wrote: Go ahead and judge me harshly. I know it’s rough but it’s something. I really really want to start writing again but every time I try I just sit there with a pencil and a notebook and nothing comes to me. It makes me want to cry. Writing has always been my outlet even though I’m not particularly good at it, it makes me feel better. And now i just feel empty. I’ve got nothing to write about and it sucks.

That was beautiful. 

Don't change a thing Losty. 

I write too, and believe me, after 30 years of writing, you will have those dry spells. It isn't something you can force. You'll have something to say again. Just give it time.
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#17
RE: Winter
(April 1, 2018 at 6:42 am)Losty Wrote: Go ahead and judge me harshly. I know it’s rough but it’s something. I really really want to start writing again but every time I try I just sit there with a pencil and a notebook and nothing comes to me. It makes me want to cry. Writing has always been my outlet even though I’m not particularly good at it, it makes me feel better. And now i just feel empty. I’ve got nothing to write about and it sucks.

I thought it was pretty damn enjoyable.

And I know all about writer's block. (One of my online nicknames is even Belgianwritersblock.)
It's easier said than done, but you gotta power through it and accept that even when you don't have anything good to write, you gotta write something bad.
You an always throw away bad stuff, but it can help you get back in the zone.

Don't give up losty, power though. You won't be lost forever.
"If we go down, we go down together!"
- Your mum, last night, suggesting 69.
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#18
RE: Winter
I got a bag a slake and a shovel in the trunk, Losty, you know...if you have anyone in mind.   Wink
(good stuff, spring is false hope, aint it..fuckin spring)
I am the Infantry. I am my country’s strength in war, her deterrent in peace. I am the heart of the fight… wherever, whenever. I carry America’s faith and honor against her enemies. I am the Queen of Battle. I am what my country expects me to be, the best trained Soldier in the world. In the race for victory, I am swift, determined, and courageous, armed with a fierce will to win. Never will I fail my country’s trust. Always I fight on…through the foe, to the objective, to triumph overall. If necessary, I will fight to my death. By my steadfast courage, I have won more than 200 years of freedom. I yield not to weakness, to hunger, to cowardice, to fatigue, to superior odds, For I am mentally tough, physically strong, and morally straight. I forsake not, my country, my mission, my comrades, my sacred duty. I am relentless. I am always there, now and forever. I AM THE INFANTRY! FOLLOW ME!
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#19
RE: Winter
(April 2, 2018 at 2:58 pm)Mr.Obvious Wrote:
(April 1, 2018 at 6:42 am)Losty Wrote: Go ahead and judge me harshly. I know it’s rough but it’s something. I really really want to start writing again but every time I try I just sit there with a pencil and a notebook and nothing comes to me. It makes me want to cry. Writing has always been my outlet even though I’m not particularly good at it, it makes me feel better. And now i just feel empty. I’ve got nothing to write about and it sucks.

I thought it was pretty damn enjoyable.

And I know all about writer's block. (One of my online nicknames is even Belgianwritersblock.)
It's easier said than done, but you gotta power through it and accept that even when you don't have anything good to write, you gotta write something bad.
You an always throw away bad stuff, but it can help you get back in the zone.

Don't give up losty, power though. You won't be lost forever.

Even if your username is losty. (Snickers)
"Hipster is what happens when young hot people do what old ladies do." -Exian
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#20
RE: Winter
I'll always love your writing Losty Smile

I'm sure the inspiration will come back again someday, even if it takes a while. I think it will come back for the same reasons that it arrived in the first place.

Smile
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