(September 10, 2015 at 3:05 am)MTL Wrote: I really like that. I wish it could be on the front page of the Toronto Star.
Just off the top of your head?
As to my style of posting, I'm sorry if it's annoying to some.
I've been expecting someone to comment on it.
I am constantly told I am too verbose.
I am trying to avoid a "wall of text",
and just make it visually easier to read, I guess.
Yes, it was off the top of my head. Not really noteworthy as poetry or prose, just a fun way of expressing it.
I too am too verbose, by my own reckoning (and likely, others', but few have said so). However, I do not find you so. I tend to count things as "too verbose" only if they are redundant/repetitive, or are saying a lot of nothing.
But I really do enjoy the way you play with the words and clearly put effort into the visuals of what you write. I noticed.
A Christian told me: if you were saved you cant lose your salvation. you're sealed with the Holy Ghost
I replied: Can I refuse? Because I find the entire concept of vicarious blood sacrifice atonement to be morally abhorrent, the concept of holding flawed creatures permanently accountable for social misbehaviors and thought crimes to be morally abhorrent, and the concept of calling something "free" when it comes with the strings of subjugation and obedience perhaps the most morally abhorrent of all... and that's without even going into the history of justifying genocide, slavery, rape, misogyny, religious intolerance, and suppression of free speech which has been attributed by your own scriptures to your deity. I want a refund. I would burn happily rather than serve the monster you profess to love.
I replied: Can I refuse? Because I find the entire concept of vicarious blood sacrifice atonement to be morally abhorrent, the concept of holding flawed creatures permanently accountable for social misbehaviors and thought crimes to be morally abhorrent, and the concept of calling something "free" when it comes with the strings of subjugation and obedience perhaps the most morally abhorrent of all... and that's without even going into the history of justifying genocide, slavery, rape, misogyny, religious intolerance, and suppression of free speech which has been attributed by your own scriptures to your deity. I want a refund. I would burn happily rather than serve the monster you profess to love.
