(November 17, 2015 at 2:20 am)Quantum Wrote:Yeah I know...(November 16, 2015 at 9:42 pm)heatiosrs Wrote: You act like I am trying hard to make a poem, and have been working on it for weeks.
This is my 2nd poem ever, and both of them so far have been done in around 5-20 minutes each and didn't originally start out as poems.
In fact, even when I finished, I didn't intend for this to be a poem, it's also not like im claiming I am any great poet or anything.
No, don't take it too seriously, your ending was just so theatrical that I couldn't resist sabotaging it a bit . Carry on.
I guess what i'm realizing is that for things like this if people don't see it the way you see it they will likely not assign the same meaning you did, and think it's without purpose.
Seems like a lot of people didn't see it the way I saw it on this one....oh well..
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