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So I wrote a poem..
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RE: So I wrote a poem..
February 15, 2016 at 10:46 pm
(February 15, 2016 at 4:21 pm)alpha male Wrote: There once was a writer named pool
Whose poetry stunk like a stool
As he struggled with verse 
He cried with a curse
Fuck! Why am I such a tool?

English is my third language...actually english would be my fourth language if you consider Tamil. I'm not exactly a writer, this is more of a hobby..

I feel good that i posted my work here because up until now everyone praised my work(proper english is hard to come across let alone english poetry where i live) but now i know my work wasn't as great as i had thought,now i know its flaws and now i have the opportunity to improve my work.

Thank you all. <3
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So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 1:58 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Exian - February 15, 2016 at 4:40 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Alex K - February 15, 2016 at 4:48 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Excited Penguin - February 15, 2016 at 4:42 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 5:09 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Homeless Nutter - February 15, 2016 at 7:37 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 8:07 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 8:02 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Thumpalumpacus - February 15, 2016 at 12:24 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 12:34 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Excited Penguin - February 15, 2016 at 4:33 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Thumpalumpacus - February 15, 2016 at 6:45 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Exian - February 15, 2016 at 4:53 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 5:07 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Exian - February 16, 2016 at 7:45 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ignoramus - February 15, 2016 at 6:59 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 8:03 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 8:09 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 8:27 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Thumpalumpacus - February 15, 2016 at 3:32 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 3:55 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by vorlon13 - February 15, 2016 at 3:37 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Homeless Nutter - February 15, 2016 at 4:11 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ignoramus - February 15, 2016 at 3:46 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by John V - February 15, 2016 at 4:21 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 4:30 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Athene - February 15, 2016 at 6:14 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Ravenshire - February 15, 2016 at 6:40 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Thumpalumpacus - February 15, 2016 at 6:46 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 6:57 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ignoramus - February 15, 2016 at 7:43 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by John V - February 15, 2016 at 9:40 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Athene - February 15, 2016 at 10:40 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 10:46 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Excited Penguin - February 15, 2016 at 6:56 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 6:59 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - February 15, 2016 at 7:04 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Athene - February 15, 2016 at 7:13 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 16, 2016 at 7:07 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 16, 2016 at 7:29 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 16, 2016 at 8:08 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by John V - February 16, 2016 at 9:02 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 16, 2016 at 9:08 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Exian - February 16, 2016 at 10:00 am

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