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So I wrote a poem..
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RE: So I wrote a poem..
Here is one I wrote about the pope.

Piety, by Brian37.(AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB and @Brianrrs37 on twitter)

 
Oh grand Phallus 

You live 

In a palace 

Wearing your phony crown 



But atoms and quarks 

Defy your remarks 

For in the end 

We lose all sound 



The sun will expand 

Making coal of the land 

And with it too 

The myth you spew 



Impressed not the least 

With your strut 

Impoverished player 

Reality guts 



In gaps you fill 

With magical spells 

Wane through generations 

Morphing into newer fables 



Beseeching is reason 

You can't hold hostage 

Free from your shackles 

My mind grasps knowledge 

(end)

Post #12 hosted here http://www.rationalresponders.com/forum/31771 at my home thread.
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So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 1:58 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Exian - February 15, 2016 at 4:40 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Alex K - February 15, 2016 at 4:48 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Excited Penguin - February 15, 2016 at 4:42 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 5:09 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Homeless Nutter - February 15, 2016 at 7:37 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 8:07 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 8:02 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Thumpalumpacus - February 15, 2016 at 12:24 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 12:34 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Excited Penguin - February 15, 2016 at 4:33 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Thumpalumpacus - February 15, 2016 at 6:45 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Exian - February 15, 2016 at 4:53 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 5:07 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Exian - February 16, 2016 at 7:45 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ignoramus - February 15, 2016 at 6:59 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 8:03 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 8:09 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 8:27 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Thumpalumpacus - February 15, 2016 at 3:32 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 3:55 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by vorlon13 - February 15, 2016 at 3:37 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Homeless Nutter - February 15, 2016 at 4:11 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ignoramus - February 15, 2016 at 3:46 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by John V - February 15, 2016 at 4:21 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 4:30 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Athene - February 15, 2016 at 6:14 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Ravenshire - February 15, 2016 at 6:40 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Thumpalumpacus - February 15, 2016 at 6:46 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 6:57 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ignoramus - February 15, 2016 at 7:43 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by John V - February 15, 2016 at 9:40 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Athene - February 15, 2016 at 10:40 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by ErGingerbreadMandude - February 15, 2016 at 10:46 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Excited Penguin - February 15, 2016 at 6:56 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 15, 2016 at 6:59 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - February 15, 2016 at 7:04 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Athene - February 15, 2016 at 7:13 pm
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 16, 2016 at 7:07 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 16, 2016 at 7:29 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 16, 2016 at 8:08 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by John V - February 16, 2016 at 9:02 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Brian37 - February 16, 2016 at 9:08 am
RE: So I wrote a poem.. - by Exian - February 16, 2016 at 10:00 am

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