RE: Twenty-six years ago today ...
August 4, 2016 at 12:49 am
(This post was last modified: August 4, 2016 at 12:51 am by Athene.)
(August 4, 2016 at 12:36 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Your writing isn't really compelling as it is. I think it needs a do-over, or a lot more editing at the very least.
Is this autobiographical or fiction?
Your thoughts and musings compelling aren't compelling. I'm serious.
You're sad. You're mean.
You will die alone.
Oh yes, you will die...Only dumb babies think they'll live forever.