(August 4, 2016 at 12:49 am)Thena323 Wrote:(August 4, 2016 at 12:36 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Your writing isn't really compelling as it is. I think it needs a do-over, or a lot more editing at the very least.
Is this autobiographical or fiction?
Your thoughts and musings compelling aren't compelling. I'm serious.
You're sad. You're mean.
You will die alone.
Oh yes, you will die...Only dumb babies think they'll live forever.
It saddens me beyond words that you can summon that level of malice against me. Nothing else to say other than that, I'm afraid.