(August 4, 2016 at 12:36 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Your writing isn't really compelling as it is. I think it needs a do-over, or a lot more editing at the very least.
Great, thanks for the advice. I'll keep it in mind.
(August 4, 2016 at 12:36 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Is this autobiographical or fiction?
Question was answered in the OP.