(August 4, 2016 at 2:13 am)Thumpalumpacus Wrote:(August 4, 2016 at 12:56 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Thumpa, I was providing honest criticism. I also like a lot about your writing, but I tend to focus on the things that I find lacking. You're obviously very smart, have a very large vocabulary, and can provide a good narrative, at least technically speaking. I just think this particular piece of text didn't arouse anything in me, nor did it make me want to keep reading after a while. This is just my opinion, it's entirely possible other people will judge it differently.
It's a good thing I write for myself, then!
I hope you feel better for having offered your opinion, 1.0. I'm sure it's important.
You said those were your recollections of it, I wasn't sure what you meant by that though - if you were being literal or not. I guess, in retrospect, that seems like a very dumb thing to assume.
Anyway, given this, my prior criticism pretty much falls flat. I'm not a big fan of autobiography, nor am I a particularly intelligent reader, so make of that what you will.
