Looking for comments / ideas for WIP project ABCs of Atheism

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Hi fellow atheists,

I'm working on a project right now called ABCs of Atheism, which is intended to be a children's book that also doubles as "adult novelty" book. At this point the pages are supremely draft with rough concept art with text that is the very first text I've put to paper (NOT child-ready yet).

But before I get too far, I'm trying to get a feel for what other atheists think about the word choices and IDEAS represented in the text.

Thanks for any critique, comments, concerns, etc.

-JP

I'm attaching the first 10 images because that's the limit. I'd love to hear what words people think should be included in an ABCs of Atheism book.

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Thanks for any comments and or suggestions!

I think it's a great idea, I love your art. 

Make sure to work on the way you express some ideas though so that the parents will want their children to read them. Like telling kids they should eat whatever they want and other such things that shouldn't necessarily be their choice, but their parents' is not very good I think. Focus on religion, sure, but don't only talk about it. Don't be afraid to moralize a little, but do it thoughtfully. 

Those are my thoughts. I hope they help!