RE: Great Poetry
March 23, 2018 at 1:29 pm
(This post was last modified: March 23, 2018 at 1:29 pm by J a c k.)
(January 15, 2018 at 10:19 am)IWNKYAAIMI Wrote:(January 15, 2018 at 10:15 am)vulcanlogician Wrote: I really liked your rainbow poem, Cod.
Thank you, it took time and great effort on my part
Wait. You’re cod? How dare you change your name!?
(March 23, 2018 at 1:03 pm)Mr.Obvious Wrote: Feed
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Bare bone torn from the hands that beseech;
their skin ripped by the bloody mouth of the leech.
They are but pounds of flesh, red and raw meat,
a feast offered to the obese beast to feed it’s greed.
It’s flesh is weak and temptation runs within;
pumping through its veins like the original sin
whispering in its ears its self-centred narration
so it might save itself from its own salvation.
Continue to dine on the body of fellow man:
a meagre carcass provides like no god can.
For out there lie no heavens, except in the lies
of how humanity is born, lives and never dies.
Yet when the last one sits on a throne o’ bones,
hungering for more than everything that it owns;
shall it finally learn it can never grow whole?
For feasts of flesh and blood empty the soul.
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