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Great Poetry
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RE: Great Poetry
Perfect Storm

The ocean clashes in rhythm against bedrock of stone
in a game of push and pull underneath the full moon.
The smell of salt water penetrates the winds which moan
into the sails of our vessel set to sink all too soon.

Onward into the darkest depths beneath the dancing tides
where we might lose ourselves to drown in fluid bliss!
Together with you, it matters not whereto the storm rides
so long as we come where waters explode into the abyss.

Hold onto the mast now the heavens above rip asunder
and our ship suffers the wrath of Thor’s heavy blow.
I’ll keep you in my arms when warm waves drag us under;
extinguishing the blazing flames roaring in our bow.

And should we wake tomorrow on white, raw sand;
alive and aglow with the sun rising beyond world’s edge
we shall build another raft to leave that lonely island
en voyage to the perfect storm to sink said fiery ketch.
"If we go down, we go down together!"
- Your mum, last night, suggesting 69.
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Great Poetry - by Zazzy - October 12, 2013 at 2:46 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by freedomfromforum - October 12, 2013 at 3:04 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Zazzy - October 12, 2013 at 3:08 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by freedomfromforum - October 12, 2013 at 3:31 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 12, 2013 at 3:43 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Zazzy - October 12, 2013 at 3:47 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by freedomfromforum - October 12, 2013 at 3:59 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 12, 2013 at 4:20 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 4, 2014 at 10:19 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Rev. Rye - December 5, 2014 at 12:33 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 9, 2014 at 9:21 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Alex K - December 9, 2014 at 9:25 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by ManMachine - December 9, 2014 at 12:01 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by robvalue - December 9, 2014 at 9:52 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by Thumpalumpacus - December 9, 2014 at 1:01 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 9, 2014 at 7:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by robvalue - December 10, 2014 at 2:55 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 13, 2014 at 3:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by ManMachine - December 17, 2014 at 7:47 am
RE: Great Poetry - by downbeatplumb - April 3, 2015 at 2:57 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 17, 2014 at 3:56 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by ManMachine - December 17, 2014 at 5:19 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 17, 2015 at 4:42 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by thesummerqueen - January 17, 2015 at 11:13 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - January 17, 2015 at 11:21 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by thesummerqueen - January 17, 2015 at 11:56 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Losty - January 19, 2015 at 7:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - February 1, 2015 at 10:52 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Outtahere - February 17, 2015 at 8:34 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - April 3, 2015 at 8:48 am
RE: Great Poetry - by strawdawg - April 3, 2015 at 10:04 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 3, 2015 at 5:13 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - December 3, 2015 at 8:05 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - April 14, 2017 at 1:11 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 6, 2017 at 6:34 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 15, 2017 at 4:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by energizer bunny - July 20, 2017 at 1:01 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 26, 2017 at 10:19 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - July 26, 2017 at 10:27 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 26, 2017 at 11:09 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 23, 2017 at 6:36 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 24, 2017 at 6:48 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 30, 2017 at 4:46 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 7:34 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 8:50 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 9:15 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 9:39 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Cod - January 15, 2018 at 9:47 am
RE: Great Poetry - by brewer - January 15, 2018 at 10:01 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 10:03 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 10:08 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 10:11 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Cod - January 15, 2018 at 10:11 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 10:15 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Cod - January 15, 2018 at 10:19 am
RE: Great Poetry - by J a c k - March 23, 2018 at 1:29 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 10:20 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - March 23, 2018 at 1:03 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by The Industrial Atheist - March 23, 2018 at 2:30 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Angrboda - March 23, 2018 at 3:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - March 23, 2018 at 10:15 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - March 24, 2018 at 2:29 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - March 27, 2018 at 4:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 4, 2018 at 6:24 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - June 4, 2018 at 6:32 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 4, 2018 at 6:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - June 4, 2018 at 9:08 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - June 4, 2018 at 7:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 20, 2018 at 5:43 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - June 20, 2018 at 7:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - August 14, 2018 at 10:16 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by The Grand Nudger - August 14, 2018 at 11:45 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - September 8, 2018 at 6:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - September 8, 2018 at 7:43 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - September 8, 2018 at 9:00 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - September 9, 2018 at 6:54 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 10, 2018 at 6:09 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - October 10, 2018 at 8:26 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 10, 2018 at 4:09 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 10, 2018 at 9:01 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - October 10, 2018 at 4:19 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 15, 2018 at 9:07 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 22, 2018 at 10:37 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 26, 2018 at 9:42 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 28, 2018 at 8:50 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - October 28, 2018 at 9:32 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 30, 2018 at 9:54 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 26, 2018 at 8:21 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 3, 2019 at 3:33 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - March 10, 2019 at 12:09 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by outtathereligioncloset - March 10, 2019 at 6:25 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - March 11, 2019 at 10:14 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Belacqua - March 16, 2019 at 5:54 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - March 16, 2019 at 2:33 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by TwoKnives99 - March 16, 2019 at 3:25 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - March 29, 2019 at 5:57 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by fredd bear - March 29, 2019 at 8:37 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - March 31, 2019 at 7:35 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - March 31, 2019 at 3:22 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - April 1, 2019 at 8:52 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by Succubus - April 11, 2019 at 7:37 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 8, 2019 at 9:16 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 9, 2019 at 8:18 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 9, 2019 at 8:22 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 9, 2019 at 11:29 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:02 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:16 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 11:43 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 10:55 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:59 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 12:59 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 1:04 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 2:19 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 2:29 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 3:07 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 3:20 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 3:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:06 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:13 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:16 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:36 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:30 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:42 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 27, 2019 at 8:26 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 27, 2019 at 9:04 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - May 27, 2019 at 5:40 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 27, 2019 at 6:15 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 4:18 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 1:07 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 8:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Sal - July 2, 2019 at 12:48 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - July 2, 2019 at 9:09 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 3, 2019 at 2:00 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 10:33 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - July 2, 2019 at 10:53 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 3, 2019 at 3:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 13, 2019 at 10:02 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 21, 2019 at 1:08 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - July 21, 2019 at 6:30 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 21, 2019 at 7:10 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 3:01 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 3:20 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 3:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 3:32 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 3:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 3:45 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 5:14 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by arewethereyet - August 15, 2019 at 5:34 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Belacqua - August 15, 2019 at 9:03 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by arewethereyet - August 15, 2019 at 4:14 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by onlinebiker - August 15, 2019 at 7:00 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 7:09 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 7:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by onlinebiker - August 15, 2019 at 8:43 pm

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