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Great Poetry
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RE: Great Poetry
 My Little Guy, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James RationalPoet on FB and @brianrrs37 on twitter).
 
I know you knead me
But why so early?
It's 4:45 am 
Why do you always wake me?
 
I can handle the hording
Of the couch
Of the bed
The way you spread out
 
So much so
I am cornered
Like a sardine in a can
Just because you can
 
I give you your space
Yet you still insist
After tons of rest
I must relent
 
To your kneading
And your pleading
Feed me, feed me
I know you knead me
 
The roosters arn't crowing
The birds arn't chirping 
The stock market bell
Has yet to open ringing
 
Yet you still insist
You lovable pest
Of waking me up
No matter what
 
Do me one favor
You cute fur ball
My best friend feline
Never stop at all
 
I know 
What you say
In the early hours
Before daybreak
 
Its not just
That you want to eat
I really understand
That you knead me
 
I know you love
The way I laugh
When you insist
On waking me up
 
You sniff my ears
You paw my head
When that doesnt work
You move to my stomach 
 
Maybe your stomach 
Is grumbling 
I still know what
You are really doing
 
You enjoy 
Like I do
Needing companionship
True and true.
(end)

Originally posted here at Rational Responders post #1008 hosted here... 

http://www.rationalresponders.com/forum/31771?page=20
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Great Poetry - by Zazzy - October 12, 2013 at 2:46 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by freedomfromforum - October 12, 2013 at 3:04 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Zazzy - October 12, 2013 at 3:08 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by freedomfromforum - October 12, 2013 at 3:31 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 12, 2013 at 3:43 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Zazzy - October 12, 2013 at 3:47 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by freedomfromforum - October 12, 2013 at 3:59 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 12, 2013 at 4:20 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 4, 2014 at 10:19 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Rev. Rye - December 5, 2014 at 12:33 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 9, 2014 at 9:21 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Alex K - December 9, 2014 at 9:25 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 9, 2014 at 9:31 am
RE: Great Poetry - by ManMachine - December 9, 2014 at 12:01 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by robvalue - December 9, 2014 at 9:52 am
RE: Great Poetry - by robvalue - December 9, 2014 at 12:05 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Thumpalumpacus - December 9, 2014 at 1:01 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 9, 2014 at 7:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by robvalue - December 10, 2014 at 2:55 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 13, 2014 at 3:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by ManMachine - December 17, 2014 at 7:47 am
RE: Great Poetry - by downbeatplumb - April 3, 2015 at 2:57 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 17, 2014 at 3:56 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by ManMachine - December 17, 2014 at 5:19 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 17, 2015 at 4:42 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by thesummerqueen - January 17, 2015 at 11:13 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - January 17, 2015 at 11:21 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Roxy904 - January 17, 2015 at 11:54 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by thesummerqueen - January 17, 2015 at 11:56 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Losty - January 19, 2015 at 7:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - February 1, 2015 at 10:52 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Outtahere - February 17, 2015 at 8:34 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - April 3, 2015 at 8:48 am
RE: Great Poetry - by strawdawg - April 3, 2015 at 10:04 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 3, 2015 at 5:13 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - December 3, 2015 at 8:05 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - April 14, 2017 at 1:11 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 6, 2017 at 6:34 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - June 7, 2017 at 8:26 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 15, 2017 at 4:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by energizer bunny - July 20, 2017 at 1:01 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 26, 2017 at 10:19 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - July 26, 2017 at 10:27 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 26, 2017 at 11:09 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 23, 2017 at 6:36 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 24, 2017 at 6:48 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 30, 2017 at 4:46 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 7:34 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 8:50 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 9:15 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 9:39 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Cod - January 15, 2018 at 9:47 am
RE: Great Poetry - by brewer - January 15, 2018 at 10:01 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 10:03 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 10:08 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 10:11 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Cod - January 15, 2018 at 10:11 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 10:15 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Cod - January 15, 2018 at 10:19 am
RE: Great Poetry - by J a c k - March 23, 2018 at 1:29 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 10:20 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - March 23, 2018 at 1:03 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by The Industrial Atheist - March 23, 2018 at 2:30 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Angrboda - March 23, 2018 at 3:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - March 23, 2018 at 10:15 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - March 24, 2018 at 2:29 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - March 27, 2018 at 4:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 4, 2018 at 6:24 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - June 4, 2018 at 6:32 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 4, 2018 at 6:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - June 4, 2018 at 9:08 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - June 4, 2018 at 7:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 20, 2018 at 5:43 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - June 20, 2018 at 7:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - August 14, 2018 at 10:16 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by The Grand Nudger - August 14, 2018 at 11:45 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - September 8, 2018 at 6:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - September 8, 2018 at 7:43 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - September 8, 2018 at 9:00 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - September 9, 2018 at 6:54 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 10, 2018 at 6:09 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - October 10, 2018 at 8:26 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 10, 2018 at 4:09 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 10, 2018 at 9:01 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - October 10, 2018 at 4:19 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 15, 2018 at 9:07 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 22, 2018 at 10:37 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 26, 2018 at 9:42 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 28, 2018 at 8:50 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - October 28, 2018 at 9:32 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 30, 2018 at 9:54 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 30, 2018 at 10:55 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 26, 2018 at 8:21 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 3, 2019 at 3:33 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - March 10, 2019 at 12:09 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by outtathereligioncloset - March 10, 2019 at 6:25 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - March 11, 2019 at 10:14 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Belacqua - March 16, 2019 at 5:54 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - March 16, 2019 at 2:33 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by TwoKnives99 - March 16, 2019 at 3:25 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - March 29, 2019 at 5:57 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by fredd bear - March 29, 2019 at 8:37 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - March 30, 2019 at 4:38 am
RE: Great Poetry - by fredd bear - March 30, 2019 at 9:20 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - March 31, 2019 at 7:35 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - March 31, 2019 at 3:22 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - April 1, 2019 at 8:52 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Macoleco - April 1, 2019 at 9:40 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - April 8, 2019 at 11:21 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Succubus - April 11, 2019 at 7:37 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - April 28, 2019 at 7:43 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 8, 2019 at 9:16 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 9, 2019 at 8:18 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 9, 2019 at 8:22 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 9, 2019 at 11:29 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:02 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 11:07 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:16 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 11:20 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:38 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 11:43 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 10:55 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:59 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 12:59 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 1:04 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 1:27 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 1:36 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 1:50 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 2:03 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 2:10 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 2:15 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 2:19 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 2:29 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 3:07 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 3:20 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 3:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:06 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:13 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:16 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:36 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:30 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:38 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:42 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 27, 2019 at 8:26 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 27, 2019 at 9:04 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - May 27, 2019 at 5:40 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 27, 2019 at 6:15 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 4:18 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - July 2, 2019 at 6:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 1:07 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 8:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Sal - July 2, 2019 at 12:48 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - July 2, 2019 at 9:09 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 3, 2019 at 2:00 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 10:33 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - July 2, 2019 at 10:53 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 3, 2019 at 3:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 13, 2019 at 10:02 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 21, 2019 at 1:08 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - July 21, 2019 at 6:30 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 21, 2019 at 7:10 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 3:01 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 3:20 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 3:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 3:32 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 3:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 3:45 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 5:14 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by arewethereyet - August 15, 2019 at 5:34 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Belacqua - August 15, 2019 at 9:03 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by arewethereyet - August 15, 2019 at 4:14 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by onlinebiker - August 15, 2019 at 7:00 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 7:09 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 7:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by onlinebiker - August 15, 2019 at 8:43 pm

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