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[Serious] Poetry

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[Serious] Poetry
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Poetry
January 5, 2020 at 9:11 am
I want to get an accurate rating for my poetry.
Please don't troll, but vote and leave a comment.

Now I will write a small sample for you:

My sight became weary
It became tired and hazy
I didn't feel it's wet and rainy
I wished if I wasn't lazy
But my thoughts were full of clouds
They were full of worry
They were scared of a pawn that shouts
They were locked behind the crowds
The infamous crowds that look so scary
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[Serious] Poetry

Messages In This Thread
Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 9:11 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 9:49 am
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 10:03 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 10:06 am
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 1:33 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 1:41 pm
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 2:05 pm
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 2:11 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 2:15 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:23 am
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 2:24 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 4:22 pm
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 5:14 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 6:49 pm
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 4:44 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 7, 2020 at 11:53 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:20 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 8, 2020 at 12:47 am
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 1:04 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 8, 2020 at 1:19 am
RE: Poetry - by Fake Messiah - January 8, 2020 at 2:18 am
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 5:17 am
RE: Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - January 8, 2020 at 5:50 am
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:15 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 9, 2020 at 7:06 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 9, 2020 at 9:09 pm
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 9, 2020 at 3:05 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:20 pm
RE: Poetry - by The Grand Nudger - January 9, 2020 at 3:27 pm
RE: Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - January 9, 2020 at 6:33 pm
RE: Poetry - by Rev. Rye - January 9, 2020 at 9:43 pm
RE: Poetry - by energizer bunny - January 10, 2020 at 4:20 am

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