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[Serious] Poetry
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RE: Poetry
(January 5, 2020 at 5:14 pm)AtlasS33 Wrote:
(January 5, 2020 at 2:24 pm)Editz Wrote: I just wish these pretentious poets would stop pretentiously flapping their pretentious, quick, easy, small poems around like they've reinvented the wheel, when all they've really done is "make a pretty pattern" out of a few dozen words which took them far less than 30 mins to assemble, in all likelihood.

A poem is much more than organizing words!
For example; this is a short poem that was in "Silent Hill:homecoming" -a videogame-:

"I stand beside the holy man
The monarchs fear my wrath
non may move the way I can
Ever the crooked path"

Fantastic riddle and also a fantastic poem

It has a flow; also a rhyme, combined with a well-put choice of words.
Brian should say his opinion

Yea, you had me with the first one. 

I have read too much poetry to know that even poetry is not set in stone.
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Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 9:11 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 9:49 am
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 10:03 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 10:06 am
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 1:33 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 1:41 pm
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 2:05 pm
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 2:11 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 2:15 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:23 am
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 2:24 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 4:22 pm
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 5:14 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 6:49 pm
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 4:44 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 7, 2020 at 11:53 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:20 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 8, 2020 at 12:47 am
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 1:04 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 8, 2020 at 1:19 am
RE: Poetry - by Fake Messiah - January 8, 2020 at 2:18 am
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 5:17 am
RE: Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - January 8, 2020 at 5:50 am
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:15 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 9, 2020 at 7:06 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 9, 2020 at 9:09 pm
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 9, 2020 at 3:05 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:20 pm
RE: Poetry - by The Grand Nudger - January 9, 2020 at 3:27 pm
RE: Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - January 9, 2020 at 6:33 pm
RE: Poetry - by Rev. Rye - January 9, 2020 at 9:43 pm
RE: Poetry - by energizer bunny - January 10, 2020 at 4:20 am

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