+1 - I agree that less is more and would consider trimming it down.
They will be initially relieved that you arent coming out as gay
Then they will be pissed your coming out as atheist
Then they will stop reading - The full explanation can wait until a later time, when they have taken it on board and are over the initial shock.
Good luck whatever you do
They will be initially relieved that you arent coming out as gay
Then they will be pissed your coming out as atheist
Then they will stop reading - The full explanation can wait until a later time, when they have taken it on board and are over the initial shock.
Good luck whatever you do