I liked it as prose, but it kinda reads a little mean. If the guy would walk your granny, and watch your house, and feed your pets (even with allergies), should it really be a big deal if he has different views than you? He is willing to do all these things for you, even though you seem as crazy to him as he must to yourself. And the only thing you want to do is shake him like a doll?
Seems like, regardless of petty beliefs, he would be a better man than you.
But it is just a story.
Seems like, regardless of petty beliefs, he would be a better man than you.
But it is just a story.