(November 16, 2015 at 9:42 pm)heatiosrs Wrote:(November 16, 2015 at 8:23 am)bennyboy Wrote: By "little bubbles of saccharine soap water" do you mean amateur poets?You act like I am trying hard to make a poem, and have been working on it for weeks.
This is my 2nd poem ever, and both of them so far have been done in around 5-20 minutes each and didn't originally start out as poems.
In fact, even when I finished, I didn't intend for this to be a poem, it's also not like im claiming I am any great poet or anything.
No, don't take it too seriously, your ending was just so theatrical that I couldn't resist sabotaging it a bit . Carry on.
The fool hath said in his heart, There is a God. They are corrupt, they have done abominable works, there is none that doeth good.
Psalm 14, KJV revised edition