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Great Poetry
RE: Great Poetry
(May 20, 2019 at 3:52 pm)BrianSoddingBoru4 Wrote:
Quote:HOLY CRAP DUDE, I am not thin skinned dumbass.

Agree to disagree.

 
Quote:Lets make this clear, "You didn't like it" you thought the poem you initially  reacted to was crap. We both agree that is what you thought.

Well, it's all of your poems (at least the ones on this forum), but OK.

 
Quote:What is insulting isn't that you didn't like it. What is insulting, is you think I give a shit or don't know what I am doing.

I've already said that I think you DO know what you're doing.

 
Quote:If you said right now, "Trump could write better poetry than you." I could care less. What pissed me off isn't that you didn't like it. What pissed me off is the same damned thing every time in the past 30 years I run into comments like this.

I can hardly be held responsible for 30 years of bad poetry reviews.

 
Quote:Make you a deal, if I ever want your advice on how to write poetry, I'll ask for it. 

But I'm not giving you advice on how to write poetry.  I never have and I never will.

 
Quote:I have been there and done that with plenty of others. You are not the first and unfortunately you wont be the last.

See above.

 
Quote:1. I know exactly what I am doing every time I write a poem.

See above.


 
Quote:2. I don't need your advice. If I wanted it, I would ask for it.

See above.

 
Quote:Of course you pissed me off dumbass, but not because you thought it sucked. It pissed me off because I get tired of running into the same shit.

If you run into that many people who don't like your poetry, it should tell you something.

 
Quote:You are like Bart Simpson pestering Homer in the back of the car, "Are we there yet?"

Eat my shorts.

Quote:Tell me again what "Skene or Parakatoi" mean or what "hot blood" is in reference to in "Enigma" i just posted privious page in in this thread?  And I am sure you know what "free verse" means too. Then after you look that up tell me the meaning of my poem "Enigma" means.

I'm not going to do that, because -as I've said - I just don't care enough.

Boru



HA HA HA HA HA...... Your cute and funny, thank you for proving my point.

You don't care, but you keep responding.

Lord Fortenbrath, if I mayith sum up your argument for thee....

Boru " You suck, you are not good at it."

Me, " Thou hast mistaken me for someone who gives a fucktith".

For your information "Skene is Greek for hut or building where actors would change their costumes and masks" later to be translated into the modern word "scene".

Parakatoi is greek for triangular displays that were swiveled on stage to allow for change of scenery between acts. Each side had different artwork to display the surroundings each act was implied in in the script. 

"Hot blood" is from Hamlet.

The meaning of "Enigma" is that not everything in life has to be dog whistle art. 

Now, if you didn't get such a simple poem, that says to me you don't know what the fuck you are talking about.
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Great Poetry - by Zazzy - October 12, 2013 at 2:46 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by freedomfromforum - October 12, 2013 at 3:04 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Zazzy - October 12, 2013 at 3:08 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by freedomfromforum - October 12, 2013 at 3:31 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 12, 2013 at 3:43 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Zazzy - October 12, 2013 at 3:47 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by freedomfromforum - October 12, 2013 at 3:59 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 12, 2013 at 4:20 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 4, 2014 at 10:19 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Rev. Rye - December 5, 2014 at 12:33 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by ManMachine - December 9, 2014 at 12:01 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 13, 2014 at 3:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by ManMachine - December 17, 2014 at 7:47 am
RE: Great Poetry - by downbeatplumb - April 3, 2015 at 2:57 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by ManMachine - December 17, 2014 at 5:19 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 17, 2015 at 4:42 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by thesummerqueen - January 17, 2015 at 11:13 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - January 17, 2015 at 11:21 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Outtahere - February 17, 2015 at 8:34 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - December 3, 2015 at 5:13 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - December 3, 2015 at 8:05 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - April 14, 2017 at 1:11 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 6, 2017 at 6:34 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - June 7, 2017 at 8:26 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 15, 2017 at 4:28 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 26, 2017 at 10:19 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - July 26, 2017 at 10:27 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 23, 2017 at 6:36 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 30, 2017 at 4:46 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 9:39 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 10:08 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 10:11 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Cod - January 15, 2018 at 10:11 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - January 15, 2018 at 10:15 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Cod - January 15, 2018 at 10:19 am
RE: Great Poetry - by J a c k - March 23, 2018 at 1:29 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - January 15, 2018 at 10:20 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - March 23, 2018 at 1:03 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by The Industrial Atheist - March 23, 2018 at 2:30 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - March 23, 2018 at 10:15 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - March 27, 2018 at 4:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 4, 2018 at 6:24 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - June 4, 2018 at 6:32 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 4, 2018 at 6:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - June 4, 2018 at 9:08 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - June 4, 2018 at 7:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - June 20, 2018 at 5:43 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - June 20, 2018 at 7:28 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - August 14, 2018 at 10:16 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by The Grand Nudger - August 14, 2018 at 11:45 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - September 8, 2018 at 6:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - September 8, 2018 at 7:43 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - September 8, 2018 at 9:00 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - September 9, 2018 at 6:54 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - October 10, 2018 at 8:26 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 10, 2018 at 4:09 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 10, 2018 at 9:01 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - October 10, 2018 at 4:19 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 15, 2018 at 9:07 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 22, 2018 at 10:37 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - October 26, 2018 at 9:42 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 28, 2018 at 8:50 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - October 28, 2018 at 9:32 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - October 30, 2018 at 9:54 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by Mr.Obvious - March 11, 2019 at 10:14 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Belacqua - March 16, 2019 at 5:54 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - March 16, 2019 at 2:33 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by TwoKnives99 - March 16, 2019 at 3:25 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - March 29, 2019 at 5:57 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by fredd bear - March 29, 2019 at 8:37 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 8, 2019 at 9:16 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 9, 2019 at 8:18 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 9, 2019 at 8:22 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 9, 2019 at 11:29 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:02 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 11:07 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:16 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:38 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 11:43 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 10:55 am
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 11:59 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 12:59 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 1:04 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 2:19 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 2:29 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 3:07 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 3:20 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 3:52 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:06 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:13 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:16 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:26 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:36 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 20, 2019 at 4:30 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 20, 2019 at 4:42 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - May 27, 2019 at 8:26 am
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 27, 2019 at 9:04 am
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - May 27, 2019 at 5:40 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - May 27, 2019 at 6:15 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 4:18 am
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RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 2, 2019 at 1:07 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by LadyForCamus - July 2, 2019 at 9:09 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by vulcanlogician - July 13, 2019 at 10:02 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - July 21, 2019 at 1:08 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 3:01 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 3:20 pm
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RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 3:32 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 3:35 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 3:45 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - August 15, 2019 at 5:14 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by arewethereyet - August 15, 2019 at 5:34 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Belacqua - August 15, 2019 at 9:03 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by arewethereyet - August 15, 2019 at 4:14 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by onlinebiker - August 15, 2019 at 7:00 pm
RE: Great Poetry - by Brian37 - August 15, 2019 at 7:09 pm
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