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Self Expression Through Written Word
#11
RE: Self Expression Through Written Word
I've written very few poems that I would share. All of those are published. A few of them I sold full rights to, so I cannot post them here. However, if I do write something new, I will be sure to share it here.

ETA: Ah, here is an excerpt I can share. Unfortunately, the original was butchered for publication and is in different forms all over the place. *sigh* So, I'll just give you a snippet. You should know that I follow no meter. My only thought when I write poetry is rhyme and that I like it, so I am not as good at poetry as I am at other creative writing ventures.

"Ignorant mouths are averse to silence

While brilliant mouths have few words to spare

Thoughtless words become a nuisance

and thoughtful silence far too rare"
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#12
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"There was a young man from Nantucket........."
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#13
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". . . whose dick was so long he could suck it . . . "
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#14
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"And he said with a grin"
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#15
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"and some cum on his chin"
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#16
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"If my ear were a cunt I could fuck it."
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#17
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ROFLOL Min and Shell are artistic geniuses!

Here's one:

The sky is that that I am,
I am a freed homme from the cell.
The sky once too held by a cell,
That which we hommes gave it to be.

See if you can find the atheistic meaning in this...

P.S. I wrote this in less than a minute so don't judge so harshly. Big Grin
Quote:"An individual has not started living until he can rise above the narrow confines of his individualistic concerns to the broader concerns of all humanity. "
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#18
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Wasn't it Genghis Khan who coined the phrase,
"It is not enough that I succeed ... everyone else must fail."


Yeah, I'm sure he was a real pleasure to have around ... *eye roll*
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#19
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Most of my poetry is too personal. And what isn't personal was written under the influence, so it's not fit to share. But I like everything I've read here. Smile
That will never hold up in court...
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#20
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I'm really more a short story person myself, but here are a few prose poems I wrote:

OUR TRANSIENT STORM.

A snowstorm sits upon a desk, a precious thing like one of Ed and Tubbs', as few, of course, will understand. Within the glass confining the whole scene, Chicago's skyline gets shaken up by a storm. It shakes, but all is settled soon, and peace resumes.
And soon, we find that we are living in a storm; things change for a brief moment and in that time all is in flux, as Heraclitus is thought to have said, but shortly after, the storm stops, and all is still.
We find that all we knew when we are born is shaken up, but by the end, the whole thing settles, ceso todo, we have gone just as the storm has, and in as brief a time as we percieved.

THE PORCUPINES (SCHOPENHAUER REDUX)
I walk in winter, dogs are sticking to the streets; it really is that cold. At one point in my constitutional, I strayed into the woods. I only wish I knew when I had gone within as clearly I had had a blackout yet again. I wished I didn't give Philip Marlowe a miss. Within the woods, I see a few collective nouns of porcupines. Apparently, they do not hibernate. Importantly, they had no way of keeping their quills in check, like the hedgehog. They climbed on one another, but then they scattered when they got stuck with their own quills. They knew they had to get some warmth, but had to get impaled to get some sort of warmth. And then, I saw another one alone, it was alive, and some of all the snow around had gone into a liquid state. And here, I saw, it was alone and could afford to be, as it had all the warmth it needed on its own, no impalement required. I left the woodland thinking to myself, Human relationships incarnate! Like Ivan Karamazov said, warmth for another requires some distance.

The "Ceso Todo" is, if I remember correctly, a reference to a poem by Lorca. Which one, I don't remember.
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I was born with the gift of laughter and a sense the world is mad.
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