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Find What is Wrong with This Right Wing Article
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RE: Find What is Wrong with This Right Wing Article
The first thing I found wrong with it was terrible punctuation in the very first sentence.

Quote:Does it seem too strong to call the way America deals with its debt "madness?"
That question mark should go after the quotation mark.  As it is, this sentence does not end, it just runs on into the next one.

I am not normally a grammar Nazi.  In forum posts and such, people can and do make mistakes.  I make them all the time.  However, this is an article written for public consumption.
If they can't bother to proof read their work, I can't be bothered to read it.

Although, I'm curious what others find in there, so I may read it out of morbid curiosity.  Angel
“Eternity is a terrible thought. I mean, where's it going to end?” 
― Tom StoppardRosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead
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RE: Find What is Wrong with This Right Wing Article - by Aroura - November 7, 2015 at 1:44 am

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