RE: Noteworthy News
July 13, 2024 at 9:56 pm
(This post was last modified: July 13, 2024 at 9:56 pm by Thumpalumpacus.)
(July 13, 2024 at 9:47 pm)Lek Wrote: Sadly, he killed someone else. Fortunately, he messed up and made him a hero.
The dead guy isn't a hero.
Also, you could use proper nouns as well as pronouns to aid clarity. Who is "he", "he", and "him" in this poorly-written sentence?