(July 13, 2024 at 9:56 pm)Thumpalumpacus Wrote:(July 13, 2024 at 9:47 pm)Lek Wrote: Sadly, he killed someone else. Fortunately, he messed up and made him a hero.
The dead guy isn't a hero.
Also, you could use proper nouns as well as pronouns to aid clarity. Who is "he", "he", and "him" in this poorly-written sentence?
The first "he" is the shooter. The second "he" is also the shooter. The "him" is Trump.
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