RE: Noteworthy News
July 13, 2024 at 10:23 pm
(This post was last modified: July 13, 2024 at 10:24 pm by Thumpalumpacus.)
(July 13, 2024 at 9:58 pm)Foxaèr Wrote:(July 13, 2024 at 9:56 pm)Thumpalumpacus Wrote: The dead guy isn't a hero.
Also, you could use proper nouns as well as pronouns to aid clarity. Who is "he", "he", and "him" in this poorly-written sentence?
The first "he" is the shooter. The second "he" is also the shooter. The "him" is Trump.
Sure, perhaps. But shitty writing is shitty writing. And I'll wait to see Trump made a hero even as he slurred the troops who stormed Omaha Beach.