(January 19, 2013 at 11:27 pm)C3P0 Wrote: What makes my satire uncreative?
You haven't read it? That explains a lot, actually
Come on now... Daddy says? Really? You couldn't be arsed to find some psychotic 'scientist' that said something similar?
Maybe you had Martin Luther King's dream, and could tell us all about it.
Perhaps it could have come off something an ex-soviet soldier told you.
Or you found out that Bridget wasn't a girl, and were shocked at how people would respond to an extremely effeminate (some might say transgendered/genderqueer), and go on to tell us all about how sick the sexual predators here are to declare him a tasty morsel.
Oh come off it... I've seen more creativity from kindergarteners (a lot more, actually, since young people usually haven't been routinely told 'this is how the world works', which leaves a lot to the imagination). I mean:
Start at 8:23
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zDZFcDGpL4U
Please give me a home where cloud buffalo roam
Where the dear and the strangers can play
Where sometimes is heard a discouraging word
But the skies are not stormy all day
