Quote:1. The mutual rivalry for piling up of worldly things diverts you,
And next in English, if you don't mind?
Quote:2. Until you visit the graves (i.e. till you die).
Fragment, consider revising.
Quote:3. Nay! You shall come to know!
4. Again, Nay! You shall come to know!
Nay indeed...
How about I go to know instead? Repeating 'you shall come to know' like some mantra is probably just going to have others thinking you're crazy, and possibly dangerous. Presentation, and all.
Quote:5. Nay! If you knew with a sure knowledge (the end result of piling up, you would not have occupied yourselves in worldly things)
Engrish, prease!
Quote:6. Verily, You shall see the blazing Fire (Hell)!
Do you have any idea just how outdated 'verily' is? Might want to consider word choice here, since it's making you come off as a pompous prick. A preachy pompous prickly porcupine from Paris.
Curious: my eyes will work in Hell? That's not so bad.
Quote:7. And again, you shall see it with certainty of sight!
8. Then, on that Day, you shall be asked about the delight (you indulged in, in this world)!
(surah Takathur) Al Qur'aan
I'm pleased to know that I'll certainly have sight. I do sincerely hope, however, that I will lose the pain receptors of my body. Figure: since I'm dead, I don't really need them for pleasure... and hell's supposedly got dibs on best torture NA.
On the day I am asked about what delight I've indulged in: I will respond simply, "It's totally worth it." Doubly so if I can catch leprosy before heading down... since apparently I can take my eyes with me: I must surely be able to take my diseases with me
Please give me a home where cloud buffalo roam
Where the dear and the strangers can play
Where sometimes is heard a discouraging word
But the skies are not stormy all day