It's not bad at all. If you don't mind some mild criticism, I think it is a little too repetitive at the end. But honestly, I've heard much much worse.

Best regards,
Leo van Miert
Horsepower is how hard you hit the wall --Torque is how far you take the wall with you
Leo van Miert
Horsepower is how hard you hit the wall --Torque is how far you take the wall with you
