6/10 for a decent read. Sounds too much like a bad Call of Duty sequence though, I think he needs to work a bit on his plots and writing, it's a bit bland.
"BEST STRY EVR SO GUD" 10/10 IGN
"BEST STRY EVR SO GUD" 10/10 IGN
Perhaps Wrote:I'll be able to fill in that hole soon. Don't worry.