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A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling.
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A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling.
Russell Island, By Brian37(AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB and brianrrs37 on twitter)

From the veranda
Overlooking the sloped backyard
To see the beauty 
Is not that hard

Mangrove trees
With octopus roots
In low tide
Attack the drying mud

Great pretender
This half moon lagoon
Pretending it is a dry riverbed
In some scorching part of Africa

But no,
It is just a slight indentation
In my friend's back yard
High tide will remind it

Shimmering silverback waters
No you are not Africa
The underlying turquoise 
Of the bay will remind you

The calm tide gently creeps in
It wants to sooth the angry roots
Lapping around them as if
They're  photons acting as both particle and wave

Those clever double slit waters
Undulate the shadows of the roots
Swaying and snaking 
Under the broccoli branch mangrove

And those chimps 
Are not Orangatangs <-----Misspelling left in for Boru) Should be "Orangutans" 
Any which way but loose 
They're kookaburras

Lap lap lap
The tide slowly creeps in
A heavy piece of driftwood
Submerges like a navy sub

But it is only temporary 
The tide retreats
Those angry roots
Exposed again
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A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling. - by Brian37 - November 30, 2020 at 8:34 pm
RE: A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling. - by Brian37 - November 30, 2020 at 9:48 pm
RE: A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling. - by Brian37 - November 30, 2020 at 9:58 pm
RE: A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling. - by Rhizomorph13 - November 30, 2020 at 10:04 pm
RE: A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling. - by Brian37 - November 30, 2020 at 10:24 pm
RE: A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling. - by Rhizomorph13 - November 30, 2020 at 10:49 pm
RE: A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling. - by Fireball - December 2, 2020 at 1:56 pm
RE: A Blast from the past. Plus bad spelling. - by Fireball - December 2, 2020 at 6:01 pm

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