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[Serious] Poetry
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RE: Poetry
Well...they'll teach you about the abab scheme (or aaBB) - which fits (in any language, including arabic) with melody...and rhythm.  Even in pop songs people step out.  Some of that shit only fits in specific dialects. Two words might only rhyme in english if you're from a particular place...the same being true of arabic.

This amounts to vocal fireworks in a performance. 





Fun fact, you can learn three chords and play any pop song in english, five if you're fancy.

-if you really wanted to see how malleable english pop songs are, try Post Modern Jukebox.

...long story short, is this. Songs, in english, are made for a drunk performer to belt out at a bar to patrons who will appreciate the overall sound while not noticing the technical complexity present, if any.

(January 8, 2020 at 2:18 am)Fake Messiah Wrote: The best poem ever:

Imagine there's no heaven
It's easy if you try
No hell below us
Above us only sky





Shit is easy to play, -kills- at closing time.
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Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 9:11 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 9:49 am
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 10:03 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 10:06 am
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 1:33 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 1:41 pm
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 2:05 pm
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 2:11 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 2:15 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:23 am
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 2:24 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 4:22 pm
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 5, 2020 at 5:14 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 5, 2020 at 6:49 pm
RE: Poetry - by Duty - January 5, 2020 at 4:44 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 7, 2020 at 11:53 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:20 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 8, 2020 at 12:47 am
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 1:04 am
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 8, 2020 at 1:19 am
RE: Poetry - by Fake Messiah - January 8, 2020 at 2:18 am
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 5:17 am
RE: Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - January 8, 2020 at 5:50 am
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:15 pm
RE: Poetry - by Brian37 - January 9, 2020 at 7:06 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 9, 2020 at 9:09 pm
RE: Poetry - by WinterHold - January 9, 2020 at 3:05 pm
RE: Poetry - by LadyForCamus - January 8, 2020 at 12:20 pm
RE: Poetry - by The Grand Nudger - January 9, 2020 at 3:27 pm
RE: Poetry - by BrianSoddingBoru4 - January 9, 2020 at 6:33 pm
RE: Poetry - by Rev. Rye - January 9, 2020 at 9:43 pm
RE: Poetry - by energizer bunny - January 10, 2020 at 4:20 am

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