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Small CV help
#1
Small CV help
Hello fellow pagans, I need a bit of help with my CV. Could you help me find another way to say this sentence "This position was a work experience placement where my main role was to process reports sent in by engineers onto the company’s system.". I want to mainly change the beginning, as I already have another part of my employment history beginning with "This was a...".
Any help is welcome (:
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#2
RE: Small CV help
Sure, mostly you need to get rid of the passive tense and thus a whole bunch of extra words: In this position, I processed reports sent into the company by engineers. Get rid of the "this was a" in the last part too and convert it to the active tense as well.
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#3
RE: Small CV help
Jenny

Great idea, must keep in mind, it sounds much more yeah! and less meh...
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RE: Small CV help
Try: "This position enabled me to ..."

That wil better explain your abilities rather than the other roles you didn't participate in.
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