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RE: Twenty-six years ago today ...
August 4, 2016 at 2:19 am
(August 4, 2016 at 2:13 am)Thumpalumpacus Wrote: (August 4, 2016 at 12:56 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Thumpa, I was providing honest criticism. I also like a lot about your writing, but I tend to focus on the things that I find lacking. You're obviously very smart, have a very large vocabulary, and can provide a good narrative, at least technically speaking. I just think this particular piece of text didn't arouse anything in me, nor did it make me want to keep reading after a while. This is just my opinion, it's entirely possible other people will judge it differently.
It's a good thing I write for myself, then!
I hope you feel better for having offered your opinion, 1.0. It's duly noted.
And here I thought I was being nice with this post, explaining the previous one. But it turns out I did exactly the opposite.
It's good to write for yourself, it's a very therapeutic and nice experience. But writing just for yourself generally produces bad writing, I think. It is a lot easier, though.
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RE: Twenty-six years ago today ...
August 4, 2016 at 2:54 am
Okay.
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RE: Twenty-six years ago today ...
August 5, 2016 at 3:12 pm
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Very interesting story.
Thanks for sharing!
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RE: Twenty-six years ago today ...
August 5, 2016 at 3:37 pm
(August 4, 2016 at 12:56 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Thumpa, I was providing honest criticism.
Maybe he wasn't out to win the Pulitzer but just to share a story and a memory.
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RE: Twenty-six years ago today ...
August 6, 2016 at 2:08 am
(August 5, 2016 at 3:37 pm)abaris Wrote: (August 4, 2016 at 12:56 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Thumpa, I was providing honest criticism.
Maybe he wasn't out to win the Pulitzer but just to share a story and a memory.
It's all good. I understand that with writing, as with any other art, styles have followings and not everyone's going to like what I do.
I was out to make the reader want to read more. That's it. Not worried about impressing the literati, not worried about being the best thing since sliced bread. I write for two reasons -- one, as you mention, is simply setting down the memories, the stories, of my life, and the other is simply to entertain folks.
He wasn't entertained? Great, maybe he'll like something else I've written or will write ... or maybe not. I'll still write for the first reason, and hope for the best.
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RE: Twenty-six years ago today ...
August 6, 2016 at 2:10 am
(August 6, 2016 at 2:08 am)Thumpalumpacus Wrote: (August 5, 2016 at 3:37 pm)abaris Wrote: Maybe he wasn't out to win the Pulitzer but just to share a story and a memory.
It's all good. I understand that with writing, as with any other art, styles have followings and not everyone's going to like what I do.
I was out to make the reader want to read more. That's it. Not worried about impressing the literati, not worried about being the best thing since sliced bread. I write for two reasons -- one, as you mention, is simply setting down the memories, the stories, of my life, and the other is simply to entertain folks.
He wasn't entertained? Great, maybe he'll like something else I've written or will write ... or maybe not. I'll still write for the first reason, and hope for the best.
Tbh, I was partly just being an asshole to you on purpose...
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RE: Twenty-six years ago today ...
August 6, 2016 at 11:05 am
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(August 6, 2016 at 2:10 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Tbh, I was partly just being an asshole to you on purpose...
Yeah, doesn't surprise me. You have a nice day, now.
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RE: Twenty-six years ago today ...
August 6, 2016 at 11:07 am
(August 6, 2016 at 11:05 am)Thumpalumpacus Wrote: (August 6, 2016 at 2:10 am)Excited Penguin Wrote: Tbh, I was partly just being an asshole to you on purpose...
Yeah, doesn't surprise me. You have a nice day, now.
Ok, you as well
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