(October 10, 2015 at 11:50 pm)Kitan Wrote: If this was the opening sentence to a novel, would you continue reading?
"She killed the infant shorty after giving birth to it."
Maybe add some details about the baby, was it a cute baby, did it resemble Winston Churchill, actually scratch, that all babies look like Winston Churchill, that man could screw around.
What did the mother look like? was she, for example, a young women in her mid twenties with hair pillar box red, wearing a skimpy red dress that clung to the body, caressing her form like an urgent lover.
Ahem.
I'm just off for a lie down.
You can fix ignorance, you can't fix stupid.
Tinkety Tonk and down with the Nazis.