Does anyone have Comments or Criticism for this video?

[Aoi Magi]

This is a good vid, but don't do just voice over to add your refutations. Try interspersing it with your own graphics and especially try to show your sources of the refutation, this will not only add more authenticity, but I won't have to keep staring at a face hugging the camera for 7+ minutes

You think so? I wanted it to be somewhat like pausing a video. I could add a pause icon each time I interject, or something along those lines.

EDIT: sources in description, I have a bad habit of not reading entire posts

Even if you want the pausing effect, in your own video, it is preferable that all the frames not be from someone else's video. And yes you should link the sources in description, but since you are using a visual medium, it's far better to highlight the important bits on screen.