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How Does This Sound?
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RE: How Does This Sound?
(February 2, 2018 at 11:24 am)Rhondazvous Wrote:
(February 1, 2018 at 7:22 pm)Brian37 Wrote: I have 900 plus written over 30 years. In the thread link below. The website isn't 30 years old, just my history of writing poems. It is the website in my sig.

CRAP, put me on the spot why don't you?

"The Illusion" here is the link. 

http://www.rationalresponders.com/forum/20870

"Ego Divinely Inspired" post #87  here at this link

http://www.rationalresponders.com/forum/31771?page=1

"Don't Say Goodbye" link here. ALSO hosted at Rational Responders. But posted here on this website  as well at this link. Post #83

https://atheistforums.org/thread-47858-page-9.html

I would be honored for your staff to read any of those. Just credit them to to Brian James Rational Poet (AKA, Brian37 of Rational Responders).

I am flattered. I read your work, like today and I think you are just WOW, so to be read on the same website would be an honor.

Hey I just realized something. When you post here at AF, it's actually poetry. This is your style. Kewl!

Okay, I sent the 3 to the reader. I'm sure he will like them and we will have the Brian James Rational Poet Spring Collection on March 31. Invite all your friends to Like and Tweet your page.

You don't need to pay me, as long as you attribute it to "Brian James Rational Poet, AKA Brian37 of Rational Responders". And while I am giving you permission to publish these three, I retain all rights to my work. Donate the money to your favorite charity.

I would like to remain anonymous so no bio or photo. 

I will say that I got my start at a local Poetry group in Northern Va, have been writing since the late 80s. 

"The Illusion" is pretty easy I think to understand. I am basically saying that everyone dies, and there is no afterlife, but you can still value the here and now and find love and joy while you are alive.

"Ego Divinely Inspired", I wrote after 9/11. It is about how religion can lead to violence. My views have changed since writing that. I STILL believe in the good in my fellow humans. I wrote it while attending a Unitarian Church, full of not only Christians but a couple of Muslims, a Buddhist, Pagan, and 3 atheists, two of them, not me, former military.
I have grown since to be more skeptical of all religions. I still however value the message of non violence in that poem.

"Don't Say Goodbye", is a poem about my mothers health decline and eventual death. The game depicted in the poem started after she had an operation, when at first we thought she would just have therapy  and we thought she would recover, but ended up being told by therapy she would not be able to live on her own again, so she ended up staying long term care. We still thought at that point she was ok, but her operation ended up getting re infected, and at that point she decided not to go any further with treatment. The game started at her nursing home as my silly way of saying goodbye and that I would see her tomorrow.
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Messages In This Thread
How Does This Sound? - by Rhondazvous - February 1, 2018 at 7:40 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Brian37 - February 1, 2018 at 7:46 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by brewer - February 1, 2018 at 8:02 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Brian37 - February 1, 2018 at 8:06 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Rhondazvous - February 1, 2018 at 9:54 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Brian37 - February 1, 2018 at 10:04 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Athene - February 1, 2018 at 9:51 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by vulcanlogician - February 1, 2018 at 10:12 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Brian37 - February 1, 2018 at 10:33 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Rhondazvous - February 1, 2018 at 1:30 pm
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Brian37 - February 1, 2018 at 7:22 pm
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Rhondazvous - February 2, 2018 at 11:24 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Brian37 - February 2, 2018 at 11:27 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Brian37 - February 6, 2018 at 7:51 am
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Rhondazvous - February 7, 2018 at 6:26 pm
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Rhondazvous - February 2, 2018 at 7:51 pm
RE: How Does This Sound? - by The Industrial Atheist - February 1, 2018 at 3:21 pm
RE: How Does This Sound? - by Whateverist - February 2, 2018 at 7:54 pm

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