Really? You had to make a video on that rubbish?
OK, I watched part of it. The sounds quality is poor, with the sound on the creationist clip that you're trying to refute being much louder and higher quality than your own. You need better sound equipment and audio levelling. You also need some basic voice coaching and better script writing. You don't have a full voice and you aren't using what you have well. Little infection or intonations, Your script plods, a bit like you're reading a grocery list. Combined, these flaws do not make for a good video. The imagery was reasonable but nothing exciting and you should try and get away from so many stills or it'll look like a powerpoint presentation rather than a video.
Given how done to death this topic is and how much work you'd need to do to get up to an even mediocre video you should stop and ask yourself if it's worth all that effort just to reach people who are either already convinced or never will be.
OK, I watched part of it. The sounds quality is poor, with the sound on the creationist clip that you're trying to refute being much louder and higher quality than your own. You need better sound equipment and audio levelling. You also need some basic voice coaching and better script writing. You don't have a full voice and you aren't using what you have well. Little infection or intonations, Your script plods, a bit like you're reading a grocery list. Combined, these flaws do not make for a good video. The imagery was reasonable but nothing exciting and you should try and get away from so many stills or it'll look like a powerpoint presentation rather than a video.
Given how done to death this topic is and how much work you'd need to do to get up to an even mediocre video you should stop and ask yourself if it's worth all that effort just to reach people who are either already convinced or never will be.
