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Story Review
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Story Review
I'm not sure if this is the right place to post this.

Quite some time ago, when I got into writing fanfiction, I wrote a story titled "The God Who Failed" - in which a god - portrayed as an arrogant and capricious mad scientist, muses over the main character of the show.

Yesterday, there was a new review written for it:

Quote:This story is very very bad idea. I don't like how you wrote about my Heavenly Father. You wrote him like he cared nothing for us. Which is why wrong in my book. This story should be taken off of here and burned. And one more thing. I pity you that you could write something like this. And I will all so tell you that Our Heavenly Father will always love you and will never leave you.

Riiight. So, ofcourse, I replied with

Quote:Take a chill pill. God isn't real. He's a made up character that serves as Santa for grown-ups.

Any thoughts or comments about what I should have said, could have said or might have to say in near future?
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Messages In This Thread
Story Review - by genkaus - March 31, 2012 at 6:01 am
RE: Story Review - by Christian - March 31, 2012 at 6:04 am
RE: Story Review - by genkaus - March 31, 2012 at 6:07 am
RE: Story Review - by downbeatplumb - March 31, 2012 at 7:32 am
RE: Story Review - by KichigaiNeko - March 31, 2012 at 6:09 am
RE: Story Review - by KichigaiNeko - March 31, 2012 at 8:27 am
RE: Story Review - by Aegrus - March 31, 2012 at 7:37 pm
RE: Story Review - by genkaus - March 31, 2012 at 7:40 pm
RE: Story Review - by Minimalist - March 31, 2012 at 8:22 pm

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