It's an okay essay, but nothing that isn't obvious
I don't think you overstated the benefits... but for the current day (job opportunities) it is a little ahead of it's time
Now if employers used video games as a way to assess situations: that would be intelligent of them. But as far as i know it is far from a common practice :S

I don't think you overstated the benefits... but for the current day (job opportunities) it is a little ahead of it's time

Please give me a home where cloud buffalo roam
Where the dear and the strangers can play
Where sometimes is heard a discouraging word
But the skies are not stormy all day