(November 1, 2013 at 1:33 am)Ivy Wrote:Quote:I disagree, If was not ready for or looking for criticism I would not have posted.
This is true. When I ask for feedback I actually want it. I don't want people to just say they like it to make me feel good. I want to know what they think so I can improve. I'm glad you think the same. I have not taken the time to read it, since I have to send some e-mails myself. I'll get back to it.
Well if you really tell me you like I of course wont object
To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow,
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,
To the last syllable of recorded time;
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,
To the last syllable of recorded time;
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.
